I NEED YOUR FEEDBACK
Hi guys and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be showing you only a little bit of work. It won't be lots but it will be something for you to give feedback on. We have been learning a little about debating and how it works. This debate is about the body system. The debats that I am doing is about the digestive system and why I think that it is the most critical ( Important ) body system.
I made this blog post to get more comments and feedback on how my work should look like from you guys.
Here is the introduction that I have. I will have facts at the bottom of the post.
I think that the most critical body system is the Digestive system
These are some facts about the digestive system.
Why : Your digestive system give’s your body nutreints and energy that you get out of your food.
Your body can’t survive without food because then you wouldn’t be able to get the energy and nutreints that you need for your body to be able to move around.
These are the facts that I think that you might not know about the digestive system
Did you know that your small intestine is 6.7m in your stomach.
Did you know that you have 10 parts to your digestive system.
Did you know that all of your Digestive system parts are all squished together to fit into your body.
These were all of the fact's that I thought you wouldn't have already known.
These were all of the fact's that I thought you wouldn't have already known.
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