SLJ P

SLJ P

Kia ora, and welcome back to another blogpost. I am visiting the country Australia. I have been doing some summer learning journey activities threw on the past 2 or 3 weeks. I am sharing with you an imaginary trip to Australia. Today we had to review a TV show from the country that we are doing.

The show I saw is called  'The voice'. In Australia. I thought that it was great to watch. I loved hearing the pople sing on the show. I would rate the show five stars. *****.

Here is the link. I don't know how to get the video.

The voice

I really liked how the judges had to push a button to turn around and see who was singing. I also liked how they set it up and changed the colours on the stage area for the song that the person was singing. Also because on one of the songs the judges couldn't turn around. The buttons were jammed or something. Broken maybe. It is teaching others to be confident

I am not to sure what was to difficult in the video. Maybe you can spot it. Put it down if you comment please.

This is a New Zealand TV show.

Survivor New Zealand

I would rate this show a four because I have never watched it. But still a four. ****.

I don't know what it is about but still. I think it is when they are on a island trying to survive.

I didn't watch this video fully yet.

Please comment and give feedback about the work that I am doing

Armistice day

Armistice day 2018

W.A.L.T share my ideas and thoughts about what I have read.

Kia ora and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be sharing with you some informarion that I have read about Armistice day. I have done some writing on a New docmenrt that one of my teachers made for reading. I will be sharing 3 facts from three different texts that I have read about.

Here is the three facts that I have written down and the links to the text.
Youtube video

Newshub

Stuff

Newshub

The white crosses were celabated for the people that died in the war.

There were 98,950 served at the war, 18,058 deaths and 41,000 injured in war.

The people holding the flags as they danced in front of lots of people.

Youtube

500 women served as nurses at the war for injured men

That the men went over seas to train some animals in egypt for war

On the 4th of August 1914 Britain and France at war with Germany.

Stuff

When you go to gallipili and in a place in france the people there love new zealnders because the helped in the war

As Anzac Day approaches a Canterbury historian is asking what would have happened if New Zealand had not fought in World War 1.

Part of the first sentence

This was not in the text except for the first sentence above

This was in World War 1

I hope that you guys have learnt something about Armistice day. Please comment down below and give feedback on my work.
Bye for now.

EasTTle writing

EasTTle writing

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be showing you some of the work that I have done. On Monday we did our EasTTle writing for the end of the year. I have writen about 12 paragragh's. Maybe 11 since my last paragragh and conclusion are small and not that big. I am really proud of the work that I did and would really like to show you.

Here is my work that I did.

Writing

I hope that it is can veiw. If it isn't please tell me in the comment's.

If your school did a EasTTle writing. Please tell me and maybe link your blog so that I can check it out and comment on it.

I do hope that you got onto my wriring al right. Please comment down and give feedback on my work. Bye for now.