W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Spencer Park
Last Friday Miss Millard and some other teachers with groups came to the beach with us. When we got there we had to put our bags on a log or on the sand and eat or just play. Some people took their shoes off and some people left them on. We got to pick up some shells and keep them and a lot of people got their skin all dirty because they were in the wet sand instead of the dry sand.
Once we had finished at the beach, we walked to the playground. Once we got there, we had something to eat, went on the playground for a little bit. I went on a really, really dizzy thing that just wouldn't let me out. It was really hot there so I thought that if I went on the spider web I would get the dizziness out of me and it did because it wasn't to dizzy.
It was a really long hike which felt like we were in Africa. There were a lot of people in Miss Millard’s group so people were pushing and shoving. We saw some horse poo and it was disgusting. We even saw a dead bird that was almost ripped to pieces. People started to say that they were beginning to get tired so Miss Millard stopped so people could get a rest.
On the bus it was hot and really squishy. The reason it was squishy was because we had to fit three people in a seat when we got in it was really hot. It was really stinky when the heat got hot. When we got back to school I was all tired out and felt a wee bit sick but I was fine. Once we got back to school I felt much better because I wasn't in that stinky, hot squishy bus.
