My Holiday writing
Hi guys and welcome back to my blog. Today I am going to share with you my writing that I have done for a week and 2 days. Our goal was to put in a sense of place in our orientation. I have not finished all of it so I will be finishing it in my own time or at home.
Here is the writing that I have been working on. It is not completley finished.
Here is the writing that I have been working on. It is not completley finished.
2 Weeks Holiday
I started off this Holiday at Nana and Grandad’s house. As I walked threw the house, I noticed that a some things had changed.
The next day we were with our Nana Maria for one whole week but stayed at Nana and Grandads house. When me and my cousin came back from Nana Marias house me and my cousin played a game of poker. Now that game of poker was really engaging.
Next after playing poker we played with some slime and with some clay hat I had moulded into a ball shape to throw on the wall and bounce back to us. We were both taking turns at throwing it onto the wall. Sometimes it fell on the floor and we had to pick it up but that was no matter because then we got to enjoy bouncing it back onto the wall again.
Threw on the day me and my cousin started to make smoothies to drink. We made one out of oreos and some out of fruit. They were the best smoothies that me and my cousin had ever made. As I could taste the flavour in them I could also smell the Bluberries, Raspberries and and mixed berries.
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