Vast ocean
Hi Guys and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be showing you a story that I have made in my hotspot doc. I am really exited to show you what I have done in my hotspot doc. I havn't finished it yet and I am still working on it. I only started a couple of days on it and some of the days I wasn't on it. It is only seven sentences long with another paragragh with only two sentence long.
Here it is.
Date:6/7/18
I dreamed deep, deeper than you can ever imagine and then drifed out into
the vast ocean. I rowed out into see going as far away as possible. It began
to get darker as I headed out more into sea. The sea was calm rocking me to
sleep. As I fell asleep the sea was becoming rough. Waves crashed over me
but I never woke up. At that moment the bout tipped over and I set off down
to the bottom of the ocean drowing at the sight of light.
the vast ocean. I rowed out into see going as far away as possible. It began
to get darker as I headed out more into sea. The sea was calm rocking me to
sleep. As I fell asleep the sea was becoming rough. Waves crashed over me
but I never woke up. At that moment the bout tipped over and I set off down
to the bottom of the ocean drowing at the sight of light.
I landed at the bottom of the ocean floor not knowing where I was. All I could
see was blurr and nothing else.
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