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Thursday, August 17, 2017

Sir edmund hillary

Sir Edmund Hillary W.A.L.T do a timeline about sir edmunds life.

For the past couple of weeks now I have been learning about what sir edmund hillary did juring his life. I feel wondourful about my work and now am exploring new things. He is on the 5 dollar note. I have made a slideshow about the timeline for you to see.




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3 comments:

  1. Miss MorganAugust 21, 2017 at 12:04 PM

    Hey Bailey,
    Wow Sir Ed is an interesting guy to learn about! You have some awesome points about moments in his life. Why do you think he is on the $5 note? It would be great if you made it so that your writing fit in the boxes nicely - that way it would be easier to read.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 31, 2017 at 10:01 AM

    Hi Bailey, I like your post about Edmund Hillary, it's really interesting, I think you need to change you title because your "edmund hillary" is not in capital letter, if you could change it to "Edmund Hillary" it would be nice =). Keep up the good work, have a great day bye....

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  3. OliviaSeptember 4, 2017 at 12:46 PM

    Hi Bailey i like your story it was very good with full stops and capital letters it was very good Bailey.

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